Glory Girl!

Not bad! If I had to give any criticism (and I feel like I do) I would point towards her bodily proportions: her arms and legs are a bit too thin for her body, and her thorax seems to be a bit malaligned (although maybe that was the result of a misused "dynamic turn" pose?). Also, it seems like you couldn't give her a neck. Overall, it seems like it was mostly a problem with you misjudging the space you had left in the sheet.

Keep practicing! You got the basics there. A bit of training, and I'm sure you'll be doing some great stuff!